2009年12月14日 星期一
backpacking&tour travel trip
There are two ways for people to choose when they are going to take a trip. One is backpacking and the other is tour travel trip. When it comes to the expense, the tour travel trip usually cost more money than backpacking. If you choose tour travel trip, it may cost you much money because the tourist agency will earn money, you should pay money for them. If you choose backpacking, you can pick the cheap hotel or restaurant. As for the location, you can go to the spot wherever you want to go if you are backpacking. Besides, you can also stay in a place for a long time rather than look around. When you are backpacking, you have to do everything by yourself including advance the plant ticket, hotel, plan the schedule and design the route. But is you join the tourist agency, you just prepare luggage, money and have fun. By join the tourist agency, you can know more people and may have more fun. If you are backpacking maybe sometimes you will feel boring and lonely. Whatever which way you choose, the important thing is have fun in your trip.
訂閱：
張貼留言 (Atom)
This piece is fluent, and some differences were discussed in it. Nevertheless, it would be a better article if you could work more on the comparison-contrast organization that I showed you online last week.
回覆刪除Some careless mistakes should be avoided, such as 'but is you join' in lines 6 and 7 from the bottom, 'whatever which way' in the second line from the bottom, and 'cost' in line 3.