2010年6月8日 星期二

Rewrite: The most unforgettable event in my life.

My first birthday in junior high was an unforgettable day in my life. My friends and I planned to BBQ in the park. On that day, I got up early. I had to wash leaves because my mom wanted to make zongzi. Then I went to the train station. After a while, the bus came. It took us fourteen minutes to take the bus to the park. We started a fire. When we finally succeeded, a woman came to us and said: this is not the BBQ section. You have to go to the BBQ section. It means we have to start a fire again. Suddenly, my friends gave a big card to me. It surprised me. I thought I wouldn’t receive a card.


After we finished the lunch, we went to the pool which was for children to play. We played with children there. I didn’t know we would play water, so I didn’t take clothes. At first, I demanded them not pull me to the water. Unluckily, they pulled me in the end. When we enjoyed playing at the pool, the sky turned black. It seemed like it was about to rain. Just as expected, it rained. We didn’t have umbrellas so we waited for about fifty minutes. However the rain didn’t stop. So we decided to walk in the rain to the bus stop. It was an unforgettable day in my life. I wouldn’t forget it.

2010年5月27日 星期四

joural4: the most unforgettable event in my life

My first birthday in junior high was an unforgettable day in my life. My friends and I was planning to BBQ in the park. In that day, I got up early. I had to wash leaves because my mom wanted to make zongzi. Then I went to the train station. After a while, the bus came. We went to the park by bus. Fourteen minutes later, we arrived at the destination. We started a fire. When we finally succeed, a woman came to us and said: this is not the BBQ section. You have to go to the BBQ section. It means we have to start a fire again. Suddenly, my friends gave a big card for me. It was surprised me. I thought I wouldn’t receive a card.


After we finished the lunch, there is a pool for children. We played with children. I didn’t know we would play water, so I didn’t take clothes. At first, I demanded them not pull me to the water. Unluckily, they pulled me in the end. When we enjoyed playing at the pool, the sky turned black. It seemed to rain. Just as expected, it rained. We didn’t have umbrellas. We waited about fifty minutes, the rain didn’t stop. Then we decided to walk to the bus stop even it was raining. It was an unforgettable day in my life. I wouldn’t forget it.

2010年5月25日 星期二

Rewrite:Labor education

Labor education is a compulsory subject for every freshman. My first job was to clean seminar room and the handicapped toilet. This job was only need one person to clean. It was not very difficult. I could do it well. My second job was to clean the second dorm’s lobby.I had a partner. Everything was OK, except for my leader. He let me feel uncomfortable. I don’t know how to describe him.My third job was to clean the restroom. I had a partner, too. But this time, I don’t like her. The first person comes to restroom have to collect garbages and wash stool, another just clean floor. In the end, we clean the wash basin together. I always arrived to restroom first. Everyday, I collected the garbages and washed the stool. It waa very tired. That girl was always late for ten minutes. When she came to the restroom, she said: sorry, I’m late! I thought ti myself: do you know collect the garbages and wash stool is tired? And you? Just clean the floor. She only collected the garbages one time during five weeks.


My forth job was to clean the passage. I had a partner, too. First day, my partner didn’t come to help me. The leader said I only need to sweep the floor. After one week, my partner came. He had a car accident last semester. My leader said, his leg wasn’t completely recovered, so I had to help him. I thought it was OK. One day, leader asked me to clean the balcony. The reason was she afraid my partner’s legs will recurrence. What?? Recurrence?? Walk to there was a difficult thing?? If it was a difficult to him, how did he walk from dorm to the management building? I couldn’t understand it! Leader asked me to help him every day. You know what? I was more tired after he came. It was really a tiring job.

2010年5月13日 星期四

Labor education

Labor education is a necessary subject for every freshman. My first job was to clean seminar room amd the handicapped toilet. This job was only need one person to clean. It was not very difficult. I could did it well. My second job was to clean the second dorm’s lobby.
I had a partner. Everything was OK, except for my leader. He let me felt uncomfortable. I don’t know how to describe him.
My third job is to clean the restroom. I had a partner, too. But this time, I don’t like her. The first person comes to restroom have to correct garbage and wash stool, another just clean floor. In the end, clean the wash basin together. I always arrive to restroom first. Everyday, I correct the garbage and wash the stool. It is very tired. That girl always is late for ten minutes. When she comes to the restroom, she says: sorry, I’, late! I think: do you know correct the garbage and wash stool is tired? And you? Just clean the floor. She only corrected the garbage one time during five weeks.

My forth job was to clean the passage. I had a partner, too. First day, my partner didn’t come to help me. The leader said I only need to sweep the floor. After one week, my partner came. He had a car accident last semester. My leader said, his leg wasn’t completely recovered, so I had to help him. I thought it was OK. One day, leader asked me to clean the balcony. The reason was she afraid my partner’s legs will recurrence. What?? Recurrence?? Walk to there was a difficult thing?? If it was a difficult to him, how did he walk from dorm to the management building? I couldn’t understand it! Leader asked me to help him everyday. You know what? I was more tired after he came. It was really a tired job.

2010年3月18日 星期四

paparazzi

Why paparazzi emerged? Many people want to know other’s privacy, especially public people. Therefore, there is a job, paparazzi, emerge. Do I like paparazzi? I think the answer is no. There are three reasons for I don’t like paparazzi.


First, paparazzi’s job is to steal a glance at other’s privacy. The more scandal they get, the more money they earn. They track public people as their as possible. What’s worse, paparazzi always report negative news. It may cause effect on children if children watch this kind of news. It not only invade privacy but make bad effect on social.


Next, paparazzi will track celebrities for get some their secret. They usually drive cars to do their job. Sometimes, in order to hide paparazzi, the driver drive fast. Drive fast is very dangerous. It’s easy to cause car accident. ”The paparazzi that chase the celebrities are animals in most cases and to an extent murderers (in one case, Princess Diana). There should be laws enacted and enforced that keep these mindless morons from pursuing any celebrity and maintaining a polite distance from them.” by Jeff Devlin, Geneva, Florida. I believe there are many car accidents were caused by paparazzi.


Finally, It’s not everyone are interesting in others privacy. Some people are disgusted with paparazzi. ”I cannot understand how people can become so overly possessed with movie stars and their children. I honestly can't see why people care whether Brad and Angelina have a boy or girl or monkey. I mean, there are so many important issues facing our world: Why give your thoughts or your attention to them. I say leave them alone to their privacy.” by Gloria Pence, Irvine, California. I have the same though with him.


To sum up, I think paparazzi should be banned. I think the people who want to know other’s privacy are selfish. No ones like to be known their own secret.

2010年3月4日 星期四

My first winter vacation in college

There is nothing special in my winter vacation. We went to Doulion to visit my grandfather’s friend with my grandfather. Both my grandfather and his friend are eighty-three years old. They are good friends since they have been junior high school students. How magic it is. Every year, we are going to my uncle’s home to celebrate New Year’s Day. When we went back to Kaousiung, the weather is hot at noon. It seemed like summer. At night, my cousin and I walked to night market. There were not many people to walk around. Maybe people were gambling in their home with their family.

Computer really is a good investment. During winter vacation, at afternoon, it usually don’t have interesting program to watch. I always surf some funny videos to watch. It let my afternoon be more colorful.

During winter vacation, my friend and I went to Tainan to play. We went everywhere by walk. We didn’t rent motorcycles. It was very hot that day. Therefore, the department store is a good place for us to rest. For us, the department store liked the paradise.

My friend and I went to our senior high school, the memories are impressed. The classroom isn’t belong to us anymore.

2009年12月14日 星期一

backpacking&tour travel trip

There are two ways for people to choose when they are going to take a trip. One is backpacking and the other is tour travel trip. When it comes to the expense, the tour travel trip usually cost more money than backpacking. If you choose tour travel trip, it may cost you much money because the tourist agency will earn money, you should pay money for them. If you choose backpacking, you can pick the cheap hotel or restaurant. As for the location, you can go to the spot wherever you want to go if you are backpacking. Besides, you can also stay in a place for a long time rather than look around. When you are backpacking, you have to do everything by yourself including advance the plant ticket, hotel, plan the schedule and design the route. But is you join the tourist agency, you just prepare luggage, money and have fun. By join the tourist agency, you can know more people and may have more fun. If you are backpacking maybe sometimes you will feel boring and lonely. Whatever which way you choose, the important thing is have fun in your trip.