joural4: the most unforgettable event in my life

My first birthday in junior high was an unforgettable day in my life. My friends and I was planning to BBQ in the park. In that day, I got up early. I had to wash leaves because my mom wanted to make zongzi. Then I went to the train station. After a while, the bus came. We went to the park by bus. Fourteen minutes later, we arrived at the destination. We started a fire. When we finally succeed, a woman came to us and said: this is not the BBQ section. You have to go to the BBQ section. It means we have to start a fire again. Suddenly, my friends gave a big card for me. It was surprised me. I thought I wouldn’t receive a card.


After we finished the lunch, there is a pool for children. We played with children. I didn’t know we would play water, so I didn’t take clothes. At first, I demanded them not pull me to the water. Unluckily, they pulled me in the end. When we enjoyed playing at the pool, the sky turned black. It seemed to rain. Just as expected, it rained. We didn’t have umbrellas. We waited about fifty minutes, the rain didn’t stop. Then we decided to walk to the bus stop even it was raining. It was an unforgettable day in my life. I wouldn’t forget it.

Rewrite:Labor education

Labor education is a compulsory subject for every freshman. My first job was to clean seminar room and the handicapped toilet. This job was only need one person to clean. It was not very difficult. I could do it well. My second job was to clean the second dorm’s lobby.I had a partner. Everything was OK, except for my leader. He let me feel uncomfortable. I don’t know how to describe him.My third job was to clean the restroom. I had a partner, too. But this time, I don’t like her. The first person comes to restroom have to collect garbages and wash stool, another just clean floor. In the end, we clean the wash basin together. I always arrived to restroom first. Everyday, I collected the garbages and washed the stool. It waa very tired. That girl was always late for ten minutes. When she came to the restroom, she said: sorry, I’m late! I thought ti myself: do you know collect the garbages and wash stool is tired? And you? Just clean the floor. She only collected the garbages one time during five weeks.


My forth job was to clean the passage. I had a partner, too. First day, my partner didn’t come to help me. The leader said I only need to sweep the floor. After one week, my partner came. He had a car accident last semester. My leader said, his leg wasn’t completely recovered, so I had to help him. I thought it was OK. One day, leader asked me to clean the balcony. The reason was she afraid my partner’s legs will recurrence. What?? Recurrence?? Walk to there was a difficult thing?? If it was a difficult to him, how did he walk from dorm to the management building? I couldn’t understand it! Leader asked me to help him every day. You know what? I was more tired after he came. It was really a tiring job.

Labor education

Labor education is a necessary subject for every freshman. My first job was to clean seminar room amd the handicapped toilet. This job was only need one person to clean. It was not very difficult. I could did it well. My second job was to clean the second dorm’s lobby.
I had a partner. Everything was OK, except for my leader. He let me felt uncomfortable. I don’t know how to describe him.
My third job is to clean the restroom. I had a partner, too. But this time, I don’t like her. The first person comes to restroom have to correct garbage and wash stool, another just clean floor. In the end, clean the wash basin together. I always arrive to restroom first. Everyday, I correct the garbage and wash the stool. It is very tired. That girl always is late for ten minutes. When she comes to the restroom, she says: sorry, I’, late! I think: do you know correct the garbage and wash stool is tired? And you? Just clean the floor. She only corrected the garbage one time during five weeks.

My forth job was to clean the passage. I had a partner, too. First day, my partner didn’t come to help me. The leader said I only need to sweep the floor. After one week, my partner came. He had a car accident last semester. My leader said, his leg wasn’t completely recovered, so I had to help him. I thought it was OK. One day, leader asked me to clean the balcony. The reason was she afraid my partner’s legs will recurrence. What?? Recurrence?? Walk to there was a difficult thing?? If it was a difficult to him, how did he walk from dorm to the management building? I couldn’t understand it! Leader asked me to help him everyday. You know what? I was more tired after he came. It was really a tired job.