Labor education is a necessary subject for every freshman. My first job was to clean seminar room amd the handicapped toilet. This job was only need one person to clean. It was not very difficult. I could did it well. My second job was to clean the second dorm’s lobby.
I had a partner. Everything was OK, except for my leader. He let me felt uncomfortable. I don’t know how to describe him.
My third job is to clean the restroom. I had a partner, too. But this time, I don’t like her. The first person comes to restroom have to correct garbage and wash stool, another just clean floor. In the end, clean the wash basin together. I always arrive to restroom first. Everyday, I correct the garbage and wash the stool. It is very tired. That girl always is late for ten minutes. When she comes to the restroom, she says: sorry, I’, late! I think: do you know correct the garbage and wash stool is tired? And you? Just clean the floor. She only corrected the garbage one time during five weeks.
My forth job was to clean the passage. I had a partner, too. First day, my partner didn’t come to help me. The leader said I only need to sweep the floor. After one week, my partner came. He had a car accident last semester. My leader said, his leg wasn’t completely recovered, so I had to help him. I thought it was OK. One day, leader asked me to clean the balcony. The reason was she afraid my partner’s legs will recurrence. What?? Recurrence?? Walk to there was a difficult thing?? If it was a difficult to him, how did he walk from dorm to the management building? I couldn’t understand it! Leader asked me to help him everyday. You know what? I was more tired after he came. It was really a tired job.
Ha ha ha, Stella. Your last paragraph made me laugh. It was so funny...well-done!
回覆刪除Well, poor Stella, I know decided to award you the prize of 'the most miserable cleaner ever'! (I found it very intersting, though.)
Anyway, sorry for what happened to you, and I'm sure you learned quite a few lessons about 'life' and the 'ugly side' of human beings.
Still, here are some mistakes I hope you can correct them.
1. Labor education is a necessary subject for every freshman.
不是necessary而是compulsory
2. I could did it well.
could跟do有看見錯誤嗎?
3.He let me felt uncomfortable. I don’t know how to describe him.
felt要用原形動詞. do you know why?
4.My third job is to clean the restroom. I had a partner, too. But this time, I don’t like her. The first person comes to restroom have to correct garbage and wash stool, another just clean floor.
改一下: the first person WHO came to the restroom HAD to COLLECT (not correct) garbages...
5. In the end, clean the wash basin together.
請加入主詞
6. That girl always is late for ten minutes.
always跟beV的位置不對
時態用過去
7. I think: do you know correct the garbage and wash stool is tired? And you? Just clean the floor.
I think 改成 I thought to myself:...
8. She only corrected the garbage one time during five weeks.
(John's feedback: that girl is really selfish and nasty!)
9. If it was a difficult to him, how did he walk from dorm to the management building?
說得好
10. Leader asked me to help him everyday.
everyday改副詞形式
11. You know what? I was more tired after he came. It was really a tired job.
第二個tired用tiring